Desperately Seeking A Page-Turner Primer.  If you are one or know of one, please comment below.

Edited after reading the comments:

Submissions on SOUL TACO are going as well as they could go without a sale.  Editorial comment has been very positive and complimentary, with one editor requesting a rewrite, while three others have said that they were on the cusp. The only thing holding them back is that the plot is not a “page-turner.”  So, I’m trying to learn how to write a page-turner.  David Lubar has been kind enough to help me do rejectomancy on the editors’ letters so that I have some specific things to work on. My agent remains positive, which is a good sign, I think.