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Des­per­ately Seek­ing A Page-Turner Primer.  If you are one or know of one, please com­ment below.

Edited after read­ing the com­ments:
Sub­mis­sions on SOUL TACO are going as well as they could go with­out a sale.  Edi­to­r­ial com­ment has been very pos­i­tive and com­pli­men­tary, with one edi­tor request­ing a rewrite, while three oth­ers have said that they were on the cusp. The only thing hold­ing them back is that the plot is not a “page-turner.”  So, I’m try­ing to learn how to write a page-turner.  David Lubar has been kind enough to help me do rejec­tomancy on the edi­tors’ let­ters so that I have some spe­cific things to work on. My agent remains pos­i­tive, which is a good sign, I think.