Thanks to everyone who commented or emailed about my last post on page-turners.  The suggestions have helped, and I’m working my way through the text, throwing out chapters and rearranging others.  It’s a slog, as most of you know, being master sloggers yourselves.

I do have one request, and I admit that I make it hesitantly.  My readers have seen several drafts of Taco. I would feel guilty asking them to have another go at it. Plus, I’d really like to have fresh eyes tell me what is on the pages instead of I *think* is in the pages. I’m hesitant to ask because I hate to impose.  With a blog though, at least I’m not putting a person on the spot (btw, I accept critiques easily, almost greedily).

So, if you would be interested in reading a 60k upper YA novel, please let me know.

Written by : thunderchikin

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  1. laurenem6 November 27, 2007 at 12:40 pm - Reply

    But we like reading it! But fine, if you’re not going to let us see it again, at least you have to tell us what you’ve changed.

  2. thunderchikin November 27, 2007 at 1:46 pm - Reply

    Aw, you make me sound like a meanie. Surely, you guys are sick of her by now?

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